paper 1 assessment learner response

 learner response--->

WWW----

'Hiba , a good knowledge of advertising conventions for question 1.1 and 1.2. Able to recall how black widow film was marketed and promoted.'

EBI---

'Do not retell the galaxy advert plot but respond to the question of how narrative features are used.

Question 2--->

Typography

• Upper case and bold – connotations of the important, powerful message of the

image and copy.

• The white text against a black background and the darkness of the image makes the

writing stand out and anchor the message of the text about training being important.

Non-verbal codes

• Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the

‘battle’.

• No direct address but the subject’s eyes are focused on pushing the heavy tyre

(physical exertion) which connotes determination and power in the face of adversity.

This is reinforced by his facial expression which has his mouth open in a roar which

connotes supremacy and effort.

• Dress code has connotations of strength since the trainers are engaged in the

activity and the clothes are functional and appropriate for task so they connote

success and durability. The make-up shows sweat and dirt which has connotations

of being ready for action and taking part / effort.

• Body stance / position connotes that the subject is ready to face and overcome any

opponent.

• The brand name ‘Under armour’ has connotations of battle and war being connected

to sport.

Verbal codes (use of language)

• The text is positioned over the top of the tyre to signify the challenge and create

synergy between the image and the message in the text.

• The word battle has connotations of fighting and trying to triumph over an enemy.

• ‘Begins off-field’ connotes preparation and a subversive look at sporting events

(focussing on the training rather than the event itself) and underpins the above

connotation.

Colour Palette

• Darkness has connotations of dangers to be faced and makes it more dramatic

• The use of the spotlight (through the flood lit logos) links to sports matches and

connotes drama / excitement but also shines on the main image connoting his

power.

• The smoke special effect adds to the drama of the situation and the idea of dangers

to be overcome.

Photographic Codes

• Long shot shows the whole power of the body and the effort involved in pushing the

tyre.

• The main image is positioned in between the flood lit logos to link his effort with the

brand image but also to isolate him and connotes personal struggle /strength.

Question 3--->

• The clear function of the narrative: to persuade people of the superior quality and

sophistication of the Galaxy product.

• The structure of the narrative: it follows a linear structure and features versions of

iconic actors from the glamorous era of Hollywood (a CGI Audrey Hepburn and a

lookalike for Gregory Peck) associated with sophistication and desirability.

• Character types can be seen as outdated stereotypes of masculinity and femininity

(‘damsel in distress’ scenario) with Audrey Hepburn cast as the ‘heroine’ character

type (Propp) with the male chauffeur coming to her aid as the ‘Hero’ archetype and

rescuing her. However, another interpretation would see Hepburn as the ‘Hero’ of

the narrative, taking matters into her own hands and forcing the driver of the car into

the ‘Helper/Donor’ position, enabling her to complete her quest.

• The use of locations in the narrative suggests a version of reality for the audience:

Italian Riviera has connotations of romance, upper class and the old Hollywood era

is evoked, suggesting the luxurious nature of the chocolate and reinforcing the ‘silk,

not cotton’ message.

• There is disequilibrium at the start when the village is associated with chaos (fruit

falling, bus stopping, people shouting). This is juxtaposed with the calm, heroic

persona that the audience encounters when they meet Hepburn and, when the new

equilibrium is restored at the end, the sweeping vista suggests endless possibilities /

traditional happy ending at the closure of the narrative.

• Message of the narrative: Galaxy is a more sophisticated, classier product than

other chocolate bars and, as such, needs time and relaxation for it to be enjoyed

properly. The audience can also experience this luxury and a happier time

(nostalgia) if they buy the product.

• The use of intertextuality: The narrative references Roman Holiday so rewards

audiences who have knowledge of the glamour of old Hollywood. The narrative is a

parody of the original film where Audrey Hepburn’s character steals Gregory Peck’s

Vespa motorcycle and he jumps on the back whilst Italians shout at them, a bus

goes past and a lady drops fruit.

Question 4--->

• Serif font for title connotes formality, high class and how well

established the magazine is (Britain’s oldest magazine).

• Use of green colour scheme (fresh and new) with white text (style,

class, sophistication).

• Recent cultural events referenced in cover lines – ‘See EU later’

references Brexit while ‘Love in the time of Corona’ reflects Covid

pandemic. Suggests that wealthy British people want to know the

latest news and current affairs.

• ‘Blond Ambition’ shows link to Prime Minister Boris Johnson

(interview with his brother). Reflects Tatler’s focus on power and

influence in Britain. This is also seen in cover line ‘Inside the new

British establishment’.

• Emma Weymouth, Marchioness of Bath, cover star – reflects

changing attitudes towards race and ethnicity in Britain and the

influence of campaigns such as the Black Lives Matter movement.

• Cover image reflects British culture’s interest in stately homes and

high society events with Weymouth dressed in a ballgown in the

gardens of her Longleat house.

• References to royalty / aristocracy suggests elite demographic and

reflects ingrained aspects of British culture (‘Off Duty Royal

Dressing’)


















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